口语8分大神告诉你口语不要犯这些错!
雅思2017-04-11 18:58:19来源 : 点击:

 在中国应试教育的压力下,口语成为很多烤鸭的大难题。兔兔特地采访了一位8分口语学霸,她不仅有从事雅思教育多年的经验,而且是位美籍华人。她从native speaker的角度为我们总结了以下几点问题。看看,你有木有中枪呢?

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1.Stereotype answers

Do you like visiting natural places?

Before: Yes, for sure. I really enjoy visiting natural places, because nowadays it is a very suitable way to relieve the pressure of life. And it can not only relax ourselves but also broden our horizons.

After: Yes, for sure. I think visiting natural places is  a great way to take the load off. What's more, it gives us a different kind of experience in relation to our fast-paced lifestyle.

点评:考生们在回答时习惯用enjoy,relax这样的词汇,并且喜欢背模版句。但往往这样墨守成规的答案会引起考官反感。

 

Before: Every coin has two sides.

After: There are two sides to everything.

点评:正如with the development of society 一样,有些学生自以为很高级的模版句往往让考官感到不适。还不如用as society develops,比较顺口。

 

2.Long Repetitive Answers

Before: In addition, members in the work group with nice relationship is the key to accomplish the goal efficiently, in other words, it's also the key to the career.

After: In addition, having a healthy work relationship can ensure efficiency and productivity.

点评:两个the key to还不如一个ensure来得实在,在考生回答问题时应避免过于冗杂的句子。

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3.Direct Translation Answers

Before: I seldom use it because using emails stands for work.

After: I seldom use it, because to me, emails mean work.

点评:中国考生喜欢直译,但会让考官觉得怪怪的。考生们可以通过多看英语电影、文章等来学习。

 

4. Chinglish Answers

Before: Reading is just like talking and talking with the wise guys is benefit and pleasing.

点评:这真的没法改了……读完脑海里就可以浮现出中文时,考生需要再谨慎思考一下。

 

Before: Young people prefer exciting and fresh leisure methods.

After: Youngsters love to venture out on new and cool activities.

点评:此新鲜非彼新鲜呐……替换低级词汇,再用地道表达,一个高分答案就出炉啦~

 

除此我们来欣赏几个好句子。

 

I have gotten many advice from friends and vice versa (反之亦然).

A good relationship with colleagues can go a long way (会大有帮助).

I can always see countless stars shine out against the black velvet sky (黑天鹅绒似的天空).

Without a good plan, you tend to procrastinate (拖延).

This color really brings out my personality(凸显性格). And I believe  every color is special in its own way(各有其美)。

I am a rational (理性的) consumer.


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兔兔先讲这么多啦,小烤鸭们下载七悠雅思app有了口语题库后,可以自己写答案再进行修改,尽量贴近高分答案。其实英语是门很美的语言,敬请期待下篇啦,口语8分女神还有更多总结。烤鸭们加油哦~~~

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